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Impressive story. Great evocative writing. Emotionally touching.

When I clicked "NEW SISTERS" on the last page, there was a notification that Dana was updated in the Dramatis Personae. When I looked, nothing had changed.

Best of luck in the Comp!

Rovarsson

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Thank you! I also saw your review on the IF Forum - double thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and will investigate that pesky Dana thing this evening. 

Cheers!